Rubric – AP English Language and Composition Grade 11 Revision Strategies: Formality in Personal Narrative

Criteria 4 Points 3 Points 2 Points 1 Point
Analyze both texts by pointing out and comparing specific elements of their writing styles Thoroughly analyzes both Douglass’s and Twain’s narrative techniques, providing detailed comparisons of specific elements such as tone, diction, and structure. Analyzes both Douglass’s and Twain’s narrative techniques, providing some comparisons of specific elements, though some details may be lacking. Attempts to analyze both Douglass’s and Twain’s narrative techniques, but comparisons are vague or lack specificity. Little to no analysis of Douglass’s and Twain’s narrative techniques; lacks comparisons of specific elements.
Provide an introductory section or paragraph that clearly introduces a topic Introduction is engaging and clearly introduces the topic, setting a strong foundation for the essay. Introduction clearly introduces the topic, though it may lack engagement or depth. Introduction attempts to introduce the topic but is unclear or lacks focus. Introduction is missing or fails to introduce the topic effectively.
Organize information by paragraph in order to create a unified whole Information is expertly organized into cohesive paragraphs that contribute to a unified and logical essay structure. Information is organized into paragraphs that generally contribute to a unified essay, though some transitions may be weak. Information is organized into paragraphs, but the structure is disjointed or lacks coherence. Information is poorly organized, lacking clear paragraph structure and unity.
Provide significant and relevant evidence in order to develop the topic Provides substantial and highly relevant evidence that effectively develops the topic and supports the analysis. Provides relevant evidence that supports the topic, though some evidence may be less substantial. Provides limited or somewhat relevant evidence, with gaps in supporting the topic. Provides little to no relevant evidence, failing to support the topic effectively.
Include commentary that explains each piece of evidence Includes insightful commentary that thoroughly explains the significance of each piece of evidence in relation to the analysis. Includes commentary that explains the significance of most evidence, though some explanations may be underdeveloped. Includes limited commentary, with explanations that are often unclear or insufficient. Lacks commentary or provides explanations that do not clarify the evidence’s significance.
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