Introduction |
The introduction is unclear or missing. It does not set up the narrative. |
The introduction is present but lacks detail and does not clearly set up the narrative. |
The introduction is clear and sets up the narrative but could use more detail. |
The introduction is engaging, detailed, and clearly sets up the narrative. |
Point of View |
The narrative does not clearly reflect Uncle Herbert’s point of view. |
The narrative somewhat reflects Uncle Herbert’s point of view but is inconsistent. |
The narrative mostly reflects Uncle Herbert’s point of view with minor inconsistencies. |
The narrative consistently and clearly reflects Uncle Herbert’s point of view. |
Use of Details |
Few or no details from the passage are used. |
Some details from the passage are used but are not well integrated. |
Many details from the passage are used and are mostly well integrated. |
Numerous details from the passage are used and are seamlessly integrated. |
Dialogue |
Dialogue is missing or does not support the narrative. |
Dialogue is present but does not clearly support the narrative. |
Dialogue is present and mostly supports the narrative. |
Dialogue is effectively used and clearly supports the narrative. |
Organization |
The narrative is disorganized and hard to follow. |
The narrative has some organization but is still somewhat hard to follow. |
The narrative is mostly organized and easy to follow with minor issues. |
The narrative is well-organized and easy to follow. |
Conclusion |
The conclusion is unclear or missing. |
The conclusion is present but lacks detail and does not effectively wrap up the narrative. |
The conclusion is clear and mostly wraps up the narrative. |
The conclusion is detailed and effectively wraps up the narrative. |
Grammar and Spelling |
There are many grammar and spelling errors that make the narrative hard to understand. |
There are some grammar and spelling errors that occasionally make the narrative hard to understand. |
There are few grammar and spelling errors that do not significantly affect understanding. |
There are no or very few grammar and spelling errors. |