Criteria |
4 Points |
3 Points |
2 Points |
1 Point |
Historical Content |
Demonstrates a thorough understanding of the Victorian Age with accurate and detailed historical facts about factory work and living conditions. |
Shows a good understanding of the Victorian Age with mostly accurate historical facts about factory work and living conditions. |
Shows some understanding of the Victorian Age with a few accurate historical facts about factory work and living conditions. |
Shows little to no understanding of the Victorian Age with inaccurate or missing historical facts about factory work and living conditions. |
Content and Detail |
Provides rich and vivid details that fully develop the diary entry, making it engaging and realistic. |
Provides sufficient details that develop the diary entry, making it interesting and mostly realistic. |
Provides limited details that partially develop the diary entry, making it somewhat interesting and realistic. |
Provides minimal or no details, resulting in a diary entry that is uninteresting and unrealistic. |
Voice and Tone |
Consistently uses a voice and tone that is authentic and appropriate for a child in the Victorian Age, enhancing the diary entry. |
Uses a voice and tone that is mostly authentic and appropriate for a child in the Victorian Age, supporting the diary entry. |
Uses a voice and tone that is somewhat authentic and appropriate for a child in the Victorian Age, but may be inconsistent. |
Uses a voice and tone that is not authentic or appropriate for a child in the Victorian Age, detracting from the diary entry. |
Organization |
The diary entry is well-organized with a clear beginning, middle, and end, and ideas flow logically. |
The diary entry is organized with a clear beginning, middle, and end, and most ideas flow logically. |
The diary entry has some organization, but the beginning, middle, and end may not be clear, and ideas may not flow logically. |
The diary entry lacks organization, with no clear beginning, middle, or end, and ideas do not flow logically. |
Punctuation and Grammar |
Contains no punctuation or grammar errors, enhancing readability and understanding. |
Contains 1 punctuation or grammar errors, but it does not significantly hinder readability and understanding. |
Contains some punctuation or grammar errors that may hinder readability and understanding. |
Contains numerous punctuation or grammar errors that significantly hinder readability and understanding. |