| Criteria | 4 Points | 3 Points | 2 Points | 1 Point |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Hook with Embedded Allusion into Action | The narrative begins with a captivating hook that seamlessly integrates a popular allusion into the action, immediately engaging the reader. | The narrative starts with a clear hook that includes a relevant allusion, drawing the reader in, though it may not be fully integrated into the action. | The narrative has a hook, but the allusion is either unclear or not well integrated into the action, which may confuse the reader. | The narrative lacks a clear hook, and the allusion is either missing or unrelated to the action, failing to engage the reader. |
| Plot Elements with Story Organization | The story includes all plot elements: exposition, inciting incident, rising action, climax, falling action, and resolution, in a well-organized and logical sequence. | The story includes most plot elements, with a logical sequence, but may lack depth in one or two areas. | The story is missing several plot elements or presents them in a confusing order, making the narrative difficult to follow. | The story lacks clear plot elements and organization, resulting in a disjointed and confusing narrative. |
| Characters and Allusion’s Role | Characters are vividly described and play a significant role in the narrative, with the allusion deeply woven into their development and the story’s theme. | Characters are well-defined and the allusion is present, but its role in character development and the theme is not fully explored. | Characters are underdeveloped, and the allusion’s role in the story and theme is minimal or unclear. | Characters are poorly defined, and the allusion is absent or irrelevant to the story and theme. |
| No Grammar, Punctuation, Spelling Mistakes | The narrative is free of grammar, punctuation, and spelling mistakes, demonstrating excellent writing skills. | The narrative has a few minor errors in grammar, punctuation, or spelling, but they do not interfere with understanding. | The narrative contains several errors in grammar, punctuation, or spelling, which may distract the reader. | The narrative is filled with errors in grammar, punctuation, or spelling, making it difficult to understand. |