Criteria |
10 Points |
8 Points |
6 Points |
4 Points |
2 Points |
Hook/Content |
Engaging and relevant hook that clearly introduces the topic and grabs the reader’s attention. |
Relevant hook that introduces the topic but may not fully engage the reader. |
Hook is present but lacks relevance or fails to engage the reader. |
Weak or unclear hook that does not effectively introduce the topic. |
No hook or introduction is present. |
Thesis |
Clear, concise thesis that effectively states the main points of comparison and contrast. |
Thesis states the main points but lacks clarity or conciseness. |
Thesis is present but unclear or incomplete. |
Thesis is vague or does not address the main points of the essay. |
No thesis statement is present. |
Topic Sentences |
Clear and focused topic sentences that guide each paragraph and relate directly to the thesis. |
Topic sentences are present but may lack clarity or direct relation to the thesis. |
Some topic sentences are unclear or do not effectively guide the paragraph. |
Topic sentences are weak or often missing. |
No topic sentences are present. |
Use of Evidence |
Strong and relevant evidence from both texts is used to support the thesis. |
Evidence is used but may not be consistently strong or relevant. |
Some evidence is used but is often weak or irrelevant. |
Little evidence is used, and it is generally weak or irrelevant. |
No evidence is used to support the thesis. |
Analysis of Evidence |
Thorough and insightful analysis that clearly connects evidence to the thesis. |
Analysis is present but may lack depth or clear connection to the thesis. |
Some analysis is present but is often unclear or superficial. |
Analysis is weak or often missing. |
No analysis of evidence is present. |
Quote-Weaving |
Quotes are seamlessly integrated into the text, enhancing the argument. |
Quotes are integrated but may not always enhance the argument. |
Quotes are present but poorly integrated. |
Quotes are awkwardly integrated or often missing. |
No quotes are used. |
Concluding Sentences |
Strong concluding sentences that effectively summarize the paragraph and transition to the next. |
Concluding sentences are present but may lack strength or clarity. |
Some concluding sentences are unclear or ineffective. |
Concluding sentences are weak or often missing. |
No concluding sentences are present. |
Transitions |
Effective transitions that smoothly connect ideas and paragraphs. |
Transitions are present but may not always be smooth or effective. |
Some transitions are unclear or awkward. |
Transitions are weak or often missing. |
No transitions are used. |
Conclusion |
Strong conclusion that effectively summarizes the essay and reinforces the thesis. |
Conclusion is present but may lack strength or clarity. |
Conclusion is present but unclear or incomplete. |
Weak or ineffective conclusion. |
No conclusion is present. |
Objective Style |
Consistently maintains an objective and formal tone throughout the essay. |
Generally maintains an objective tone with minor lapses. |
Some lapses in objective tone. |
Frequent lapses in objective tone. |
Does not maintain an objective tone. |
General Formatting/Grammar |
Essay is well-formatted with minimal grammar errors. |
Generally well-formatted with some grammar errors. |
Formatting and grammar errors are noticeable. |
Frequent formatting and grammar errors. |
Significant formatting and grammar errors. |