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Topic relates to a real event |
Topic does not relate to a real event. |
Topic loosely relates to a real event. |
Topic somewhat relates to a real event. |
Topic mostly relates to a real event. |
Topic clearly relates to a real event. |
Events told in time order, excluding unnecessary details |
Events are not in time order and include many unnecessary details. |
Events are somewhat in time order but include unnecessary details. |
Events are mostly in time order with some unnecessary details. |
Events are in time order with few unnecessary details. |
Events are clearly in time order with no unnecessary details. |
An engaging introduction |
Introduction is not engaging and does not draw the reader in. |
Introduction is somewhat engaging but could be improved. |
Introduction is mostly engaging and sets the stage for the narrative. |
Introduction is engaging and captures the reader’s attention. |
Introduction is highly engaging and hooks the reader from the start. |
A cohesive body |
Body is disjointed and lacks coherence. |
Body is somewhat cohesive but transitions are weak. |
Body is mostly cohesive with some effective transitions. |
Body is cohesive with smooth transitions between ideas. |
Body is highly cohesive with seamless transitions. |
A satisfying conclusion |
Conclusion is abrupt and does not provide closure. |
Conclusion is somewhat satisfying but could be stronger. |
Conclusion is mostly satisfying and wraps up the narrative. |
Conclusion is satisfying and leaves the reader with a clear ending. |
Conclusion is highly satisfying and leaves a lasting impact on the reader. |
First-person point of view |
Point of view is inconsistent or not in first person. |
Point of view is somewhat maintained but shifts occasionally. |
Point of view is mostly consistent in first person. |
Point of view is consistently in first person. |
Point of view is consistently maintained in first person, enhancing the narrative. |
Tone appropriate for intended audience |
Tone is inappropriate or inconsistent for the audience. |
Tone is somewhat appropriate but needs improvement. |
Tone is mostly appropriate for the audience. |
Tone is appropriate and engages the intended audience. |
Tone is highly appropriate and effectively connects with the audience. |
Exact words |
Words are imprecise and lack detail. |
Words are somewhat exact but could be more specific. |
Words are mostly exact and provide clarity. |
Words are exact and enhance the narrative. |
Words are highly exact, vivid, and bring the narrative to life. |
Variety of sentence types |
Little to no variety in sentence structure. |
Some attempt at varied sentence types but limited success. |
Moderate variety in sentence types with some success. |
Good variety in sentence types enhances the narrative. |
Excellent variety in sentence types adds depth and interest to the narrative. |
Correct grammar and usage |
Multiple errors in grammar and usage throughout. |
Some errors in grammar and usage present. |
Few errors in grammar and usage. |
Mostly correct grammar and usage. |
Correct grammar and usage throughout the narrative. |
Correct spelling |
Multiple spelling errors throughout the narrative. |
Some spelling errors present. |
Few spelling errors. |
Mostly correct spelling. |
Correct spelling throughout the narrative. |
Correct punctuation and capitalization |
Multiple errors in punctuation and capitalization throughout. |
Some errors in punctuation and capitalization present. |
Few errors in punctuation and capitalization. |
Mostly correct punctuation and capitalization. |
Correct punctuation and capitalization throughout the narrative. |
Neatness |
Work is messy and difficult to read. |
Work is somewhat neat but could be more organized. |
Work is mostly neat and organized. |
Work is neat and well-organized. |
Work is exceptionally neat and well-presented. |
Consistency of margins and spacing |
Margins and spacing are inconsistent and messy. |
Some attempt at consistent margins and spacing but not maintained. |
Margins and spacing are mostly consistent with minor inconsistencies. |
Margins and spacing are consistent throughout most of the narrative. |
Consistent margins and spacing enhance the overall presentation. |