| Criteria | 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Topic relates to a real event | Topic does not relate to a real event. | Topic loosely relates to a real event. | Topic somewhat relates to a real event. | Topic mostly relates to a real event. | Topic clearly relates to a real event. |
| Events told in time order, excluding unnecessary details | Events are not in time order and include many unnecessary details. | Events are somewhat in time order but include unnecessary details. | Events are mostly in time order with some unnecessary details. | Events are in time order with few unnecessary details. | Events are clearly in time order with no unnecessary details. |
| An engaging introduction | Introduction is not engaging and does not draw the reader in. | Introduction is somewhat engaging but could be improved. | Introduction is mostly engaging and sets the stage for the narrative. | Introduction is engaging and captures the reader’s attention. | Introduction is highly engaging and hooks the reader from the start. |
| A cohesive body | Body is disjointed and lacks coherence. | Body is somewhat cohesive but transitions are weak. | Body is mostly cohesive with some effective transitions. | Body is cohesive with smooth transitions between ideas. | Body is highly cohesive with seamless transitions. |
| A satisfying conclusion | Conclusion is abrupt and does not provide closure. | Conclusion is somewhat satisfying but could be stronger. | Conclusion is mostly satisfying and wraps up the narrative. | Conclusion is satisfying and leaves the reader with a clear ending. | Conclusion is highly satisfying and leaves a lasting impact on the reader. |
| First-person point of view | Point of view is inconsistent or not in first person. | Point of view is somewhat maintained but shifts occasionally. | Point of view is mostly consistent in first person. | Point of view is consistently in first person. | Point of view is consistently maintained in first person, enhancing the narrative. |
| Tone appropriate for intended audience | Tone is inappropriate or inconsistent for the audience. | Tone is somewhat appropriate but needs improvement. | Tone is mostly appropriate for the audience. | Tone is appropriate and engages the intended audience. | Tone is highly appropriate and effectively connects with the audience. |
| Exact words | Words are imprecise and lack detail. | Words are somewhat exact but could be more specific. | Words are mostly exact and provide clarity. | Words are exact and enhance the narrative. | Words are highly exact, vivid, and bring the narrative to life. |
| Variety of sentence types | Little to no variety in sentence structure. | Some attempt at varied sentence types but limited success. | Moderate variety in sentence types with some success. | Good variety in sentence types enhances the narrative. | Excellent variety in sentence types adds depth and interest to the narrative. |
| Correct grammar and usage | Multiple errors in grammar and usage throughout. | Some errors in grammar and usage present. | Few errors in grammar and usage. | Mostly correct grammar and usage. | Correct grammar and usage throughout the narrative. |
| Correct spelling | Multiple spelling errors throughout the narrative. | Some spelling errors present. | Few spelling errors. | Mostly correct spelling. | Correct spelling throughout the narrative. |
| Correct punctuation and capitalization | Multiple errors in punctuation and capitalization throughout. | Some errors in punctuation and capitalization present. | Few errors in punctuation and capitalization. | Mostly correct punctuation and capitalization. | Correct punctuation and capitalization throughout the narrative. |
| Neatness | Work is messy and difficult to read. | Work is somewhat neat but could be more organized. | Work is mostly neat and organized. | Work is neat and well-organized. | Work is exceptionally neat and well-presented. |
| Consistency of margins and spacing | Margins and spacing are inconsistent and messy. | Some attempt at consistent margins and spacing but not maintained. | Margins and spacing are mostly consistent with minor inconsistencies. | Margins and spacing are consistent throughout most of the narrative. | Consistent margins and spacing enhance the overall presentation. |