| Introduction |
1 |
The opening statement is engaging and clearly relates to the topic of comparing a character from “Animal Farm” to its real-world counterpart. |
| 2 |
The thesis statement is clearly stated and provides a strong foundation for the essay. |
| 3 |
Clearly outlines three points that will support the thesis throughout the essay. |
| Body |
6 |
Each paragraph begins with a topic sentence that effectively introduces a new point. |
| 6 |
Provides three pieces of evidence for each supporting point, demonstrating a strong understanding of the novel and its historical context. |
| 6 |
Each paragraph concludes effectively, summarizing the point and transitioning smoothly to the next. |
| Conclusion |
2 |
The thesis is restated clearly, reinforcing the essay’s main argument. |
| 3 |
The conclusion includes a summary of the three main points discussed in the essay. |
| 2 |
Identifies which scope point is most significant and explains its importance. |
| Academic Language |
13 |
Effectively uses impersonal language, passive voice, connectors, and formal language. Deduct 1 point for each incorrect use. |
| General English |
6 |
Correct use of grammar and spelling, including all 8 parts of speech. Deduct 1 point for each error. |
| Formatting |
5 |
Essay is double spaced, uses 12pt font, paragraphs are indented, and margins are correct. Deduct 1 point for each formatting error. |
| Mechanics |
5 |
Punctuation is used correctly throughout the essay. Deduct 1 point for each punctuation error. |
